Since I’m with you: A Song

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summary: the boy who love his girlfriend then he made a song for her at Jatinangor.

Since I’m with you

My life is more meaningful

I see an angel when you smile in front of me

Your voice is peaceful and your love is so warm

So baby please listen, you’re the one that I need

Hold… my hands

And stay… I will never let you go

Hey baby… I will love you

Just the way you are

Just the way you laugh

Just the way you smile

I know I’m not a perfect person in this place

But you make it’s true, since you stay in my heart

When you stare at me, I feel like I’m in heaven

And makes me believe that angel is exist

The world feels so dark without you

By my side

Don’t ever try to go away from my heart

Since…you beside me,

I feel like I’m the luckiest men in this place

I believe that you are my true love

Word count : 152 words

Thanks to :

Reosandy putra for helping me make the music arrangement

Rian Fauzan for being my singer in this song

Mr. Sandya for teaching me how to make a good song

References:

Ungu – Demi Waktu

My Chemical Romance – I dont love you

Project pop – bau bau

Link for work dramatization : https://soundcloud.com/rianfozan/since-im-with-you

12 thoughts on “Since I’m with you: A Song”

  1. I think the song is really full of expression of love. I like the arrangement of the music and the singer really have a good voice. There’s a few grammatical mistakes. In the last line, I think it’s better to say “man” then “men” because you’re the only one who dating this girl, right? But after all, it’s a really good song!

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  2. Wow, it’s a nice song. The lyrics is easy listening, Rian rising the song well , although only using a guitar. After all it’s a good song.

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  3. 180410130009/ C

    Hello, Rian! Actually this is a really sweet song with (absolutely) sweet lyrics. Your voice is good and this music totally reminds me of I Don’t Love You song. May you can sing this song to your girlfriend as soon as possible.

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  7. 180410130034
    Since I really thought this is Rian’s song, I wanted to mock Rian by putting his own name in the Thank You Notes, but it’s you Vel. Btw, I couldn’t agree more with Eldo’s comment- that this is a-cheesy-love-song alike, maybe because you don’t put the lyrics metaphorically. Yet, by bringing this kind of lyrics your message or feelings through this song is directly delivered to your listene- which is good.

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  8. 180410130034
    Since I really thought this is Rian’s song, I wanted to mock Rian by putting his own name in the Thank You Notes, but it’s you Vel. Btw, I couldn’t agree more with Eldo’s comment- that this is a-cheesy-love-song alike, maybe because you don’t put the lyrics metaphorically. Yet, by bringing this kind of lyrics your message or feelings through this song is directly delivered to your listener- which is good.

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